Rin Okumura

Let's do this point by point.
1. There are no obvious flaws in the anatomy, but I do have to say that his right hand (the one at the top) looks quite a bit larger than his left hand, it may just be the pose, but I thought I'd point it out. Also the foot in the front, the lace on the show is too far out, it makes it look like his foot is twisted into the viewers direction, while the sole shows the opposite.

2. I would make a comment about the lighting, but I know it's hard to keep it how it looks on the paper when you scan it, but the lighting of the end of the tail is a bit loff. Judging by how the lighting falls onto this person, it would be dark on the inside with lighter colors on the outside.

3. The colors are really good, very strong, especially since you can see the light skin color. Usually scanners mess those colors up. But yes mainly, I just want to point out that you are very good with the choice of colors and how strong to make which one, very good coloring skills.

4. Another thing I noticed is that his ear is jut a little bit too small, make it a little bigger and well you'd be set.