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Rin Okumura by blazekid7 Rin Okumura by blazekid7
Hey guys!

So I Finally got my ProMarkers :iconfinallyplz: and I decided to colour this in.
It is for my friend :Animal-Cartoonist140:

It's not that great -_- :icongivingupplz:
The Hair+Blazer+Trousers were like impossible to get 2 different blacks so i used black pencil for one shade,and black marker for the other.
Commission Info:

I will be slowing down doing commissions because It is almost my exam period(I won't stop doing it just yet).
When my Exam period starts I will stop drawing and put commissions on hold untill after(Last exam 27th june or so)

But After that,I only need to go to school in september!(Drawing fest) :D :iconherotimeplz:


So guys what do you think? ^_^

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Let's do this point by point.
1. There are no obvious flaws in the anatomy, but I do have to say that his right hand (the one at the top) looks quite a bit larger than his left hand, it may just be the pose, but I thought I'd point it out. Also the foot in the front, the lace on the show is too far out, it makes it look like his foot is twisted into the viewers direction, while the sole shows the opposite.

2. I would make a comment about the lighting, but I know it's hard to keep it how it looks on the paper when you scan it, but the lighting of the end of the tail is a bit loff. Judging by how the lighting falls onto this person, it would be dark on the inside with lighter colors on the outside.

3. The colors are really good, very strong, especially since you can see the light skin color. Usually scanners mess those colors up. But yes mainly, I just want to point out that you are very good with the choice of colors and how strong to make which one, very good coloring skills.

4. Another thing I noticed is that his ear is jut a little bit too small, make it a little bigger and well you'd be set.
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WarriorsShadowsky Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome!!! I love Rin Okumura<3
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
^_^
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:iconwarriorsshadowsky:
WarriorsShadowsky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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Strictlyfan2010 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so coool ^^
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thanks :)
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Strictlyfan2010 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) ur welcome
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Turquoiselover247 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like the picture and Im doing something like that in pencil drawing!
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Thanks!
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Turquoiselover247 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome~~!!:)
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flameangelabyss Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is my Critique without posting on Critique.
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Good to know you're having fun with your new markers!
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