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Rin Okumura by blazekid7 Rin Okumura by blazekid7
Hey guys!

So I Finally got my ProMarkers :iconfinallyplz: and I decided to colour this in.
It is for my friend :Animal-Cartoonist140:

It's not that great -_- :icongivingupplz:
The Hair+Blazer+Trousers were like impossible to get 2 different blacks so i used black pencil for one shade,and black marker for the other.
Commission Info:

I will be slowing down doing commissions because It is almost my exam period(I won't stop doing it just yet).
When my Exam period starts I will stop drawing and put commissions on hold untill after(Last exam 27th june or so)

But After that,I only need to go to school in september!(Drawing fest) :D :iconherotimeplz:


So guys what do you think? ^_^

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:iconblacky91:
Let's do this point by point.
1. There are no obvious flaws in the anatomy, but I do have to say that his right hand (the one at the top) looks quite a bit larger than his left hand, it may just be the pose, but I thought I'd point it out. Also the foot in the front, the lace on the show is too far out, it makes it look like his foot is twisted into the viewers direction, while the sole shows the opposite.

2. I would make a comment about the lighting, but I know it's hard to keep it how it looks on the paper when you scan it, but the lighting of the end of the tail is a bit loff. Judging by how the lighting falls onto this person, it would be dark on the inside with lighter colors on the outside.

3. The colors are really good, very strong, especially since you can see the light skin color. Usually scanners mess those colors up. But yes mainly, I just want to point out that you are very good with the choice of colors and how strong to make which one, very good coloring skills.

4. Another thing I noticed is that his ear is jut a little bit too small, make it a little bigger and well you'd be set.
What do you think?
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WarriorsShadowsky Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome!!! I love Rin Okumura<3
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
^_^
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:iconwarriorsshadowsky:
WarriorsShadowsky Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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MissHayleyQuinn Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so coool ^^
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
thanks :)
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MissHayleyQuinn Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) ur welcome
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Turquoiselover247 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like the picture and Im doing something like that in pencil drawing!
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconturquoiselover247:
Turquoiselover247 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome~~!!:)
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flameangelabyss Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is my Critique without posting on Critique.
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Good to know you're having fun with your new markers!
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lxlx-lx-xlxl Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How nice critique ! :o
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconroxie-in-wonderland:
Roxie-In-Wonderland Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great work on this!!!!~ :D
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Thanks and thanks for the more :+fav:'s XP
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EnyasMusicBox Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really awesome! I love the coloring technique. It looks really, really good.
His outfit is really well drawn, too.
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
Thanks!
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EnyasMusicBox Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome <3
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
It's not a trace....I used that as a reference lol
Can't you see all the mistakes?The leg sizes,the shoes and I even changed the position of one of his hands.
Think before you speak.
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Oh so thousands of people on deviantart can use a reference picture and draw the same pose,and I cant?
I didn't say it was my own work, Hence 'Fan Art' You got it wrong,So your going on about my drawing skills,Completely irrelevant.So what If i didn't think up of the picture?I just wanted to draw it because someone requested me to?
What's your actual problem?
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Firstly,Get your facts right
Tracing- 'To copy by following lines seen through a sheet of transparent paper.'
You started this pointless arguement,How is it art theft?Its a Fan art of a drawing.

And your criticise my drawing skills?
have you seen yours? Honestly,You started this,I told you I didn't trace and then you go off at a tangent and start talking about the actual drawing.Well played.

An Exact copy?As I said it's not an exact copy,Are you blind?
People request to draw certain images,I wouldn't be surprised If they haven't requested one from you.

This is just harrassment....-_-
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
Ok well i'll just wait for that day then.
I'm sorry I should thank you @_@
I should thank you for bashing my work,accusing me, and threatening to report me...

I didn't make the pose/character myself but I made the drawing my self o_o
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AzeilaRose Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good work! :thumbsup:
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
thanks
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magicpotion Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is by far one of the best in your gallery! The pose is really good and I like all the details you put into this!
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012
Thanks for the comment ^_^!
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:iconkatexvalon123:
Katexvalon123 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is REALLY good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :squee:

unlike me who sucks...-_-'.....
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Thanks! Don't be so harsh on yourself :'(
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Katexvalon123 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ur welcome:hug:....and thanks I guess^^'
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Also thanks for the watch and fav ^_^
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:iconkatexvalon123:
Katexvalon123 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime!!! ^^
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:icontengoku-no-tsuki-jay:
looks sooo much better than before lol...you coloring has improved though i cant talk :D keep up the good work, you actually manged to fit in the legs,,great work :)
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Why thank you.(lol)Its teh markerz!!
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Kkboombox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pfft this the best you can do ?


HAhahaha i'm joking , this is freaking amazing , i hate you jala >< well as long as you don't get better then me i'm fine :P lool but your getting real good , you suck boy
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Make your mind up OTL
This one isn't that great :'(
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:iconkkboombox:
Kkboombox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol okies ;p
yes it is freaking epic >< Y U GET SO GOOD?!

lolz i'm working on my first few manga chapters , they acvtually look cool :D
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
They better be... lol
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:iconkkboombox:
Kkboombox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol they shall my dear boy
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Animal-Cartoonist140 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks so much better now ^^
I widsh I had some markers too...
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Also Y U NO FAV?!?!?!
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Animal-Cartoonist140 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I FAVE IT NOW THEN!
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Hurray!
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Animal-Cartoonist140 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheheplz:
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Yumichan216 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's awesome ^.^
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blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012
Thanks!
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Yumichan216 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^.^ You're welcome~
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LTrevill Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it! ^>^
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